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the following are short story titles from my creative writing class 2003, with excerpts from the critiques i had to write that were not meant to be sarcastic but came out that way, regardless:

crazy
“you really get the sense that she is crazy.”

damn moreen
“a story like this is difficult to punctuate, so that was impressive.”

the evil within
“the idea of alexandra biting a vampire back is very interesting…”

enough
“…that being the movie “enough” with jennifer lopez.”

irony
“ultimately, i don’t know how i feel about the ending, except that it would have been better if i had not been looking for irony.”

seattle
“things like this are not dwelled on, so the story moves quickly, and i liked that aspect.”

a night to remember
“i do feel that the plot itself is really good and that the characters and situations are clever and interesting.”

the prodigal wife
“there are several twists that work and keep the story interesting.”

occasional hits
“first, i feel that i should apologize for how many times i marked on the story itself.”

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